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Life is a spark that is inextinguishable and  it goes on.              
Like a river it has twists and turns.        
It's an explosion of passion, rage, and lust rolled into one.                              
It's beauty is unrivaled .                            
It can be as horrifying as death.            
It's warm like fire                                  
but can be cold as ice .                                
With Nature at its helm                                
there is no telling where                          
It will end up.                                          
Life is a text that is illegible to even the best poets.                                      
For it can never be understood.
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I was just playing super smash bros. and this came randomly 2 me.



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~bialng Mar 29, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uh I love the theme u used here
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~SabasReflection Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
I love the second last line. Wow. :wow:
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~Jumping-Genet Feb 17, 2013  Student Filmographer
This is awesome! =D
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this is what comes of playing video games. the perfect argument in the 'videogames are bad for you' debate. love it.
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~ZadenWillowfyre Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the use of the word inextinguishable! The only critique that I would say is *personal preference here* I might switch the lines
"Like a river it has twists and turns."
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"It's warm like fire but can be cold as ice."
Since sparks have to do with fire and helm is a nautical term, by switching these lines, your similes and metaphores flow together.
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*DareSmithCreations Jan 11, 2013  Professional Writer
interesting ^_^ !
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=WiNGz69 Jan 11, 2013  Student Writer
It all begins with that simple question. Good job :) Also smash bros is an awesome game ;)
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